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Xotis Story 13: Unluckiness xs by ~Xotisman:iconXotisman:



"This is it" sighed Toko "The Ladybirds Graveyard."
They were reading a wooden sign which read the Ladybirds Graveyard.
The Graveyard had tombstones everywhere. They were shaped like Ladybirds and had writing on them.
"Well" said Alia cheerfully "Lets not wait all day."
She walked inside the graveyard.
Tolzio, Toko, Poyao and Gel followed.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Tolzio turned round.
Gel was pinned to the ground with purple binding magic.
Tolzio walked up to him.
"Gel whats wrong."
Gel struggled but then dropped.
The magic disappeared.
Gel looked exhausted. The magic had eliminated his energy.
He got up slowly groaning.
"Come....on" he said desperately. "We....need ......to.....find....Mr.......13"
He pointed into the distance and sure enough there it was the Unlucky Carnival.
They started walking through the Graveyard.
The Graveyard was eerie. The tombstones had strange curses embedded on them. there was a thin white fog which shimmered with the light of the bright white moon. To add to the atmosphere was the ocasionall sounds of laughing in the distance.
The grass was black in the colour of the night sky.
Tolzio saw Alias head turn.
"Whats is it Alia." asked Tolzio
"Uh i thought uhhhhhhhhh never mind." said Alia uncertinly
Tolzio then looked back up ahead.
The circus tent glowered like a giant before them.
They walked inside.
Strangely it was dark inside. No lights no nothing.
"Well sooo..." said Toko walking
BANNGGGGGG
Light shined on Toko and salt flew onto him.
"WELLL WELCOME OUR GOOD GUESTS TIME FOR THE ACTING IN THE UNLUCKY CARNIVAL." said a voice
"What the" said Alia confused.
"ANDDD NOWWW PRESENTING OUR KING OF MEAANNN OUR PRINCE OF BAD LUCK. WELCOME ONTO THE STAAAGGGEE MR 13"
A spotlight of white shined onto a spot on a stage.
They saw a young boy in a magpie cloak with a 13 on his shirt.
Mr 13.
He smiled evily at them.
"Welcome our good friends, I so glad that you returned to my circus again."
He then smiled a big grin.
"So i can destroy you."
Tolzio glared at him.
Toko's fist stiffened.
Suddenly a loud voice erupted behind them.
"YOU YOU CREEP, THAT BAD LUCK YOU GAVE TO ME HAS POISONED MY LIFE, IM NOW WALKING BAD LUCK EVERYWHERE."
He then ran up to Mr 13 and took out his vines.
"Foolish boy" smirked Mr 13. "You think with all that bad luck you can beat me."
Mr 13's face then became different. He grew a long beak. Wings erupted from his back and his feet became bird like.
His big Black eyes became beady.
He had transformed into a magpie.
Gels vines thrashed towards him.
Mr 13 opened his claws and grabbed the vine. He then broke it like a piece of paper.
Gel gasped.
"Now to finished you. 13 BAD LUCK BLAST."
A glowing dark 13 appeared above Mr 13.
It then blasted through Gel.
Gel then collapsed.
Tolzio and Toko couldn't hold their anger back anymore.
"YOU WILL NOT GET AWAY WITH THIS" Tolzio shouted.
Toko took out Bomb Balls.
"LETS DO THIS."
Tolzio threw his sword at Mr 13's wings.
Mr 13 then flapped his wings and magiclly Black Cats flew out of them and onto Tolzio.
A giant column fell down onto him.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
Toko threw some bombs at Mr 13.
Mr 13 then opened his mouth and Magpie feathers flew right out of them and onto the bombs gentley.
The Bombs exploded.
Poyao then took flight and dive bombed Mr 13.
"YOU NO GET AWAY WITH DIS" said Poyao
Mr 13 then glowed purple and exploded.
Poyao flew to the ground.
Alia ran over to him crying.
"Poyao im sorry im only there were some way to counter bad luck."
She then had an idea.
She got a stick and drew on the mud.
"Toko Tolzio keep him busy."
Toko then threw a doll at Mr 13.
Mr 13 blasted it with his talons and fired sharp feathers at him.
Tolzio got his sword and broke them.
"13 BAD LUCK BLAST"
the glowing 13 flew at them.
Tolzio picked up his sword which had dropped and slammed it into the 13.
Black Cats flew all over him and salt was whirliung around him.
He felt pain. Immense pain. He shouted out madly.
He felt stuck to the power of this.
This was it the power of the High Agents of Oragath. Ultimate Power.
The pain then stopped.
"Now to finish you." Mr 13 laughed.
He fired a purple beam at him.
Alia flew in frount of him and had something in her hand.
Mr 13 looked scared.
It was a four leaf clover.
Tolzio was confused.
"Relfect back the Bad Luck Four Leaf Clover." shouted Alia
The purple beam flew back at Mr 13.
He then exploded and fell to the ground.
"This is the l l last of me" he laughed "But you will get yours."
His body then evaporated into thin air.
Gel and Tolzio then managed to get up. Beating Mr 13 had destroyed the bad luck on their bodies.
"We've won" said Alia
Tolzio nodded
Toko Poyao and Gel cheered.
"Let's leave now" said Tolzio "We need to get to the Lunar Temple."
Tolzio nodded and went to obtain his sword.
He then heared a sinister voice.
"You have disapointed the Oragath Mr SneakEar." said the voice.
"Bu but sir i i i" stuttered Mr SneakEar.
"Since Mr 14 has left to take care of buisness i was sent to finish the job."
Mr SneakEar looked absolutely frightened.
A Black Shadowed Hand thrusted itself into Mr SneakEars body and then it went back out holding a ball of Light.
Mr SneakEar lay there lifeless and spooky.
Tolzio wasting no time hurried to the others.
Who was that and what did he do to Mr SneakEar.
They went and headed off to the Lunar Temple.
A Purple Light Erupted in the 13th Grave.
A Body then rose out of it laughing evily.
The person then walked off into the distance with feathers flying out of his back....


to be continued..............
©2006-2009 ~Xotisman
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Mr 13 makes his reappearance.

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:iconjessybelldove:
...That was freaky!!

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Time is money, thats why I cant afford it. :(
:iconxotisman:
lol

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The Ultimate Doom Colours Red and Black really cool

My Story : Read the Xotis Story
:iconjessybelldove:
How dare you laugh at me T~T

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